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Ralf and the Impossible Prison by JLZ

January26

Agency report codename F|4M1nG() There was a prison break that was thwarted @33?w8vs/2w Error System malfunction Errorrrrrr…

 

Sorry for that rude interruption but if you are expecting a fairy tale you failed to find it epically.  Let’s start with the beginning. My name is Ralf and I’m a cactus. But not just any cactus, a bandit cactus. You may think that it’s fun to be living a life of crime you are wrong dead wrong.

 

One fine day in the desert I heard a rumor from a mouthy tumbleweed that my friend Lint the horned lizard (who was a master hacker) got arrested for attempting to steal a treasure so great and secret almost no one knows where and what it is. I realized that if I get that treasure I would be rich and be able to stop having to steal to survive.

 

One problem Lint was the only one who knew where it was and he was locked in the most secure prison in this desert. Horse Wand. Sure it may sound cute but it is almost impossible to escape from. Only one person has escaped from it, Quan the Chicken but no one knows where he is. This was gonna be impossible but for all that treasure it would be worth it.

 

First things first I had to be arrested for a legendary crime luckily with my bounty so high (999,999,999,999,999 dollars) it shouldn’t be too hard  I just had to find a cop. So I decided to find the nearest person I could and steal from them. I quickly saw a scorpion now was my chance. I quickly pickpocketed them but poorly enough for them to notice and they quickly dialed 911. Faster than I could say run they were there with handcuffs the popo in the desert is very strict and can almost smell crime.

 

Very soon I was in a cell in Horse Wand and hurray there was Lint right across the way. I shouted but he didn’t respond. I realized the rooms must be soundproof. The guards most not want to hear the prisoners insult and yell at them from inside their cells. I had to find another way to get his attention and communicate. I spent an hour speaking until someone on the speaker said “Lunchtime” In a voice filled with clicks. Strange it sounded familiar.

 

In the “Lunch hall” which was a pretty big exaggeration, it was more of a tiny hut with a pot of soup in it surrounded by a bunch of prisoners. Horse guards kept watch to make sure no one tried anything funny. I saw Lint and quickly shoved my way out of the crowd which was pretty easy when you’re spikey and no one wants to touch you. Lint turned my way and quickly jumped back surprised.

 

“What are you doing here” he hissed in a low tone

 

“I came to get you so I can find that treasure” I replied

 

“Now is not the time let’s talk about it on the field” he said

 

“But-” I was quickly cut off from the speaker

 

“Freetime in the field” It said/clicked.

 

We were all escorted to the field which was so big that even with 700 inmates you could just sit by yourself and not have to talk to anybody. I saw Lint heading to a corner and he looked at me and pointed towards the corner. I quickly followed. When we got there I saw a camel who had a scar over their eye. 

 

“Ralf meet Carly” Lint said 

 

“Nice to meet you Carly” I said while looking at the camel right in front of me

 

“I have heard about you Ralf from Lint. I have heard of your many heists but have you heard of me?” Carly said in a mellow voice

 

I checked my brain for any information about a camel named Carly. There was only one thing I could remember but no way it can’t be.

 

“Are you the legendary Carly that could escape from any prison?” I said in awe

 

“Aren’t you clever yes I am” She chuckled

 

“I found out the reason Quan was able to escape the prison it’s because of Carly here.” Lint said matter of factly.

“Then why are you still here?” I asked Carly 

 

“That Quan ditched me and left me to rot” She spat

“But why would you of anyone need Quan?” I asked confused

 

“That’s because to escape from this prison you need at least two people but no one trusts each other” she said sadly

 

“We were gonna escape tonight, want in?” Lint asked

 

“Sure” I replied 

 

We talked strategy until the speaker turned back on “Back to your cells prisoners” clicking and clacking. Why was that so familiar I pondered searching for any memories nothing came to mind.

 

Later that night I woke up to a loud crash. The prison break had started. I heard a machine buzzing then all the doors opened. The speaker turned on “Stop the Prisoners!” It announced. Guards quickly arrived. Then everything fell into chaos. There was a whirlwind of punches, kicks, and bites. Tranquilizer darts flew everywhere one grazed my prickles. But I spotted Carly and Lint and I rushed towards them.

 

“In order to escape we need the warden’s keys” Carly shouted over the mayhem.

 

We all looked around for where it may be. We decided it’s probably where all the guards were coming from. We rushed there and we saw an elevator. We pressed the button but it said robotically “Please insert your security card”

 

“Of course” I shouted sarcastically

 

I looked for the nearest guard that I could steal from. I saw one and quickly pickpocketed them they never knew. I looked at the card and it read general Nike. I knew that if this Nike was a general their card would definitely work on this elevator. I inserted it and it said “ welcome general Nike”

 

Nike quickly turned around from hearing their name and shouted “Hey get away from their”

We quickly hopped in the elevator and pressed the top button and it closed before they could get in. 

 

“Whew” I sighed “That was close but luckily everything  from here on out is gonna be downhill”

 

“Don’t let your guard down yet” Carly said firmly “The warden is tougher than you think” 

 

“How do you know?” I said 

 

“Who do you think gave me this scar?” Carly said

 

I was shocked. What kind of creature could cause a scar like that. As I was pondering the elevator dinged.

 

“Were here” Lint said grimly

 

The doors slowly creaked open and there I saw a spider. I screamed. It was not a tiny spider far from it. It was at least 7ft tall. Worst of all it was a black widow spider. 

 

“Took you long enough Carly” it clicked

 

“Listen Bethany just stand aside we are gonna get those keys one way or another so let’s just do it the easy way” Carly replied

 

Bethany laughed a cruel and empty sound “You wish Carly the only thing your getting is one less eye”

“Charge!” Lint yelled

 

We jumped at Bethany who spat venom at us. But we were too quick to get hit. But it wasn’t easy for us either whenever we got close she swiped at us with her razor-sharp claws. The noise outside was dying down. We had to hurry pretty soon the guards would swarm us and we would lose our chance at escape. Carly screamed in a shrill voice and went flying from one of Bethany’s claws. I ran over. It was bad there was an open wound on her back and it was red.

 

“Just finish her for me” Carly said in a faint voice

 

Then she was gone. I was filled with rage and decided to use it against Bethany. I charged and hit her faster than she could swipe then I hit her on the head so hard it made a very loud BONK. Then she collapsed. I quickly stole the ring of keys and me and Lint ran. 

 

We discovered another elevator had locks all over it luckily we had the key. I put in the key then turned it and clank all the locks fell. We entered then hit the up button right as the guards swarmed the room. We didn’t talk the whole way up. Then it stopped and dinged. It opened and we felt the cold desert air and saw the moon above. We made it we had done the impossible escaping from Horse Wand.

 

“Let’s go get that treasure” I said as I turned to Lint and we ran off in the direction of adventure.

 

So that’s how we escaped and not whatever this file says happened cause it didn’t we were not stopped we were not thwarted we are 2 of the 3 people that could escape and don’t let anyone inform you otherwise. This Ralf and Lint signing off.

 

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System Rebooted B.O.S.S agency report now online system hack thwarted.

 

Written By Jacob Z 

Expect a sequel

 

 

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One Comment to

“Ralf and the Impossible Prison by JLZ”

  1. January 31st, 2021 at 12:27 am      Reply Lindsey Says:

    Jacob,
    I love your use of combining plant and animal characters in your creative story! You have a great storyline with the exciting climax of the prison break. The ending leads me wanting to know more about Ralf and Lint’s future adventures.
    Great job!


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