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100 word challenge by Edward

March19

A man was walking down the street in the UK when suddenly there was a  loud boom as the rain started pouring and lightning crashed down. People  quickly ran into shelters and umbrellas filled the streets, as he walked into a garden trying to find a tree he could find to hide under.Then lightning struck him, but he felt fine. Then he noticed that he could no longer move. He slowly turned into metal, then the pain started. The pain lasted for hours, and it was even more painful when his face fell off and was swept away by the wind.

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“100 word challenge by Edward”

  1. March 21st, 2021 at 7:33 am      Reply Mrs Boyce Says:

    Hi Edward,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I so wasn’t expecting that ending! The poor man!
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

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