100 WC Week 30 Tatum L
May6
The doorbell rang. The woman got up from the kitchen table and made her way to the door. She opened the door. A man appeared in the doorway. He wore a black top hat and a big bushy mustache and smelled of cigarettes. He was holding a rather large leather briefcase. There was a brief conversation. He stepped inside. The woman disappeared for a moment, and then came back with a steaming cup of black coffee. He thanked her as he took a sip and then sat down on the sofa. He opened the briefcase. Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room.
Wow! You have set the stage well! Ending with the prompt leaves the reading wanting more!
Keep writing!
Mrs. Silver
Team 100
Illinois, USA